Saturday, May 31, 2008

Saturday, May 31, 2008

When the one you love does not love you back,
That is the point when strength is at lack,
What you feel is shearing pain
And that all is in vain.

When your heart does not obey your command,
And you scream of a persistent demand,
To feel the person you relish,
So other things perish.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Beutiful poem!You could be a great poet!!! :D

Anonymous said...

Spiffy job bro'! I always knew you're talented, but while reading your blog it gives me the impression of reading an artists writtings. Congrats and congrats!